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finally i've read until 10 pages XDDDDD
sorry i didnt comment your previous pages,so i will sum up all here.
-I like the story thus far!!but you have to pay attentio to the feet and neck.maybe you should make the neck more..wider or something
-The background are nice,but i think you can do more with it ^^
-You have some unique manga style.i think its my first time to see you drawing like this..or i am just forget XDD
-you should tidy up your lines how about using a pen?
And in this page in the first panel,i think that dullahan fingers are wrong,dont you think?:3 the thumb should face that way i think...but maybe...
Lolz,i will continue reading this XDDD i really like the concept story
sorry i didnt comment your previous pages,so i will sum up all here.
-I like the story thus far!!but you have to pay attentio to the feet and neck.maybe you should make the neck more..wider or something
-The background are nice,but i think you can do more with it ^^
-You have some unique manga style.i think its my first time to see you drawing like this..or i am just forget XDD
-you should tidy up your lines how about using a pen?
And in this page in the first panel,i think that dullahan fingers are wrong,dont you think?:3 the thumb should face that way i think...but maybe...
Lolz,i will continue reading this XDDD i really like the concept story